Saturday, February 22, 2014

FAIL

Ugh.  I hate when I write vague poems.  What good are those?  I didn't set out to be vague . . . but it somehow spiraled away from me.


Fate

Write about the sun, she said,
worship at the altars
of the ancients.
Take communion with the dawn
of waking man,
find your bright equivalent.

I know Diana and Selene
are not enough
when the rays fight against my fingers
and stain red the darkness
even when I close my eyes.
But if I were to join forces with Sumer,
with Babylon—
If I were to build a tower—
I’m certain I would be struck down,
lie broken in the sun.
Aurora seems kinder—
but even then—
exhaustion—

Though sometimes I feel ancient
in my bones,
others I know I am too young,
the years stretching out before me
in an endless string of stars.

I miss you.
I miss you.
I miss you.

Luna, luna, luna. . . .
 
 
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Also, in reading over old posts, I've realized how wildly unclear they are.  I seriously don't know what on earth I'm talking about in several places.

1 comment:

  1. Sometimes it's not about meaning so much as the emotions provoked in the reader from the images you provide.

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